(Thankyou very much for your kind words DOE. I hope those new to the boards since I was last here will also give me a chance and provide their thoughts on the stories. Please remember everyone that I want all reviews... if you think my story is bad, please tell me why. If you think it's good...
(I appologize for my absence of... almost a year and a half. Right before my last post my father passed away, and since then life has been quite hectic with moving to a new area, getting a new job, and trying to adapt to a completely different life. I hope people are still interested in reading...
To begin with, I'm sorry that I have never replied to your excellent story first. To be quite honest, today is the first day I've ever even seen it. I think that you are doing quite well with your story. I love how your having the characters grow and mesh with each other and I can't wait to...
(First off, I must once again thank everyone for their wonderful comments.
Panther, I am very glad to see that you enjoyed my line about a name not a number. Really in my mind, for the characters to have finally broken away from the impersonalization of a number and to have been given a name...
(DOE, I feel honored that you are enjoying my story so far. I hope you keep reading and let me know if there's anything I can do to improve. Everyone, thank you for reading. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.)
Chapter 14
“Did you find 33569?” General Schrager asked as he stared at the...
Chapter 13
Luchen’s eyes swiftly swept over the two-story ranch house that was now his home. “It’s lovely.” Shoran whispered quietly as she and Luchen slowly walked up the driveway to the front door. With the key that Dick had provided Luchen unlocked the door and they walked in. “Oh…”...
DOE, there's not really much I can say except for wow. Any ideas about this being a fanfiction basically left as I continued to read through these stories... a novel is really the only acceptible description for it. Your well woven plot and wonderful characters make this story one of the best...
(Once again, thank you everyone for the wonderful replies. From what I've read about the Lazarous Pit, it is very possible that it could restore Shoran's abilities to have children, but at this moment in the story... of course neither Luchen or Shoran know anything about the Lazarous Pit...
(Everyone, thank you for the wonderful replies. Batgirl, I'm sorry to say that I won't be saying whether the baby was going to be a boy or girl because, there would have been no way of knowing. With the child be in such an early stage of development they just didn't know. I know that it was a...
(Batgirl, Panther, I'm glad your both enjoying this story, and I'm very glad to see that my characters interest you so much. This chapter has a little more action in it and I hope you enjoy it. Keep commenting and letting me know what you think.)
Chapter 10
Luchen was silent as he drove...
Quick question for anyone knowledgable in this area. Which Green Lantern worked with Batman, Nightwing, Batgirl, Robin, and Superman? Would it be Guy Gardner, Kyle Rayner, or both?
(I appologize to everyone for the shortness of this chapter. Hopefully my next post will be longer, but at least things are still moving. I hope you enjoy, and I hope you keep replying. I do thank everyone for your support so far and all questions will be answered in time.)
Chapter 9...
Chapter 8
(One Year Later)
(July 2cd)
Luchen smiled to himself as he raised the axe and swung once more, finally chopping through the log. Slowly he lifted his gaze, scanning the landscape around him. Though he and Shoran didn’t own the house outright yet, they were playing of the...
Everyone, thanks for the great replies. It really helps when a fanfiction writer is able to see that everyone is enjoying his story. Many question are obviously being posed towards me about the story, and though I woudl like to answer them, for the most part I can't. Basically everything you...
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